6 Sentence Writing

This morning for writing we had to write a 6 sentence story. This is mine. 

Once upon a time there was a convivial dragon named Jupiter. He lived in a humongous ice palace with his friend, Elsa in the deserts of Awesomeness. He was able to breathe cold ice and make stupendous mango and coconut otai. But unfortunately his friend, Elsa did not like Mango’s. He thought for a very long time about how he could change her opinion about this particular fruit. Instead of trying to make Elsa eat Mango’s, he changed it from Mango to Watermelon and Elsa and Jupiter lived happily ever after eating otai day after day.

Every Picture Tells a Story

I know that static images are images that don’t move at it can either be a picture or a poster

This photo has got 2 killer whales on it that look like they are on their way to somewhere to eat. I think what makes this photo unique is that the killer whales are there because you can have a photo of mountains and water but it is even awesomer because of the whales. This photo makes me feel relaxed and like I can just do nothing forever.

Prospective Student Writing

Strenuously climbing the towering mountains, Tarzan dangled from the vertical rock face.  Reaching onwards, he gripped onto a rock that looked like it was bound to fall. Luckily it was sturdy. He was so scared. With an apprehensive feeling, he was determined to climb to the top of the steep cliff.

 Reaching the top , Tarzan saw the Dojo. At that moment he had so many emotions running through his head. But what he was feeling the most was tiredness, anxiousness and relief.

 

 Walking towards the humongous door, he knocked and waited to see who would answer. He heard a clanking of chains coming from the hefty door. “Huh? What’s that noise?” he wonders apprehensively. Glancing up he sees a Sensei and in respect he bows. The sensei gives a penetrating stare and points to the right.

 “What?”, Tarzan gives in expression of his face. He thinks that he climbed up the mountain, risks his life, and goes to the dojo to gets rejected. So in reaction he drooped his body in rejection of the sensei and slumps off slowly.

 Then, to show the sensei he is worthy he meditates all night and day. Deep in meditation, Tarzan doesn't even realize that the door opened. But then he opens an eye and stands up. Again the Sensei points to the right.  So he then again turns away in disappointment.

 Then something struck Tarzan. He scrunches his face and turns around to prove to the sensei. He ran up and “BAM” the door was knocked out. One kick and it was gone. Ready to show he was worthy, the sensei came out and pointed to the right hand side again, for the third time.

   This time tarzan looked and there was a sign that said, “USE THE SIDE ENTRANCE”. In embarrassment he turned and walked to the side entrance. So all this time when he thought he was getting rejected, he was actually getting told to use the side entrance.